Wednesday 27 April 2011

Evaluation activity three part 12



We also received feedback from someone abroad who was very good at analyzing films and his feedback is shown below.

Aite bruv,
Here's a couple of perceptions on your feature film extravaganza.
First up, it hangs together nicely in general. Continuity is pretty well adhered to, the lighting is well chosen and technically the whole piece is well constructed.
The minor things that distracted me were mainly abrupt editing. In a couple of moments (I'm thinking specifically of the night/morning switchover, and the cut between the office & arriving home), the editing is a bit harsh. Maybe a slower fadeout, or having some sound that spanned across both sides of the cut would reduce the harshness of the cuts.
Bottom line is, it's very enjoyable, and is dark without being typically angsty. Good job bruv.


This feedback was particularly helpful and from this we did notice aspects, which should be changed. This led us to mess around with the fades because he said they were harsh, however in the end we thought a longer fade did not work. Therefore we decided to leave that aspect of it. Nevertheless we were very pleased by his response and the constructive criticism we received was very good and from this we did notice things that could be done. Overall the fact he said it was enjoyable and that the "continuity is well adhered too" was pleasing. Also, this feedback was from a male and does fit into the younger bracket of our target audience and because of this it was even more effective.


As well as this another written feedback we received is shown below.


"That film IS brilliant! Well done to the characters! =D ... made me laugh at the end, the boy wi the towel on his head... brilliant! Never expected that! So funny! =D xxx "


Even though this feedback was from a female, it was still pleasing to her and what was more pleasing is that we realized our film could target a female audience as well and that the comedic elements were well received by most. 

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